Dreamgiver

I look at the shiny twinkly stars in the dark dark sky, Then look at the white fluffy cloud floating in the sky. I look down at all of the washing getting washed up on the cloth lines outside, and all of the houses. Oooh! I look at the old 1879 orphanage, I fligh to it with a spark of my wings to the orphanage. I walk on the creaking deck outside, then I open the old cranky door and look at all of the children sleeping. I take a book out of my pocket and I look at the address of the orphanage I write it in my note book of addresses I put my book away and I fly and with the magic eggs. I put them on to a boys bed. Then I take one magic egg, crack it in half then pour some yolk onto the ballet shoe then she dreams of being a ballet superstar performing in front of billions of people. I take the same magic egg with still half the yolk in it, then I pour some more creamy THICK yolk onto the ASTRONAUT chapter book then he smiles in bed dreaming of being an Astronaut floating around in space looking at all of the stars.I go to the next kid all snuggled up in his creamy white bed, he dreams of being a famous NFL player passing the ball around. I pour some creamy THICK egg yolk onto a musician magazine and then he dreams of being a famous musician playing on the drums. The magical golden glowing eggs soon start to run away. BUT…     But the astronaut kid knocked a super magical egg off his bed to a horror story OH NO!!! The astronaut kid woke up I hide behind the bed then I quickly fly out as fast as the speed of light he just saw me he looked scared as I spy on him hiding.

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WALT write a recount focussing on using adjectives and correct punctuation.

 Watch the following video of an African safari African Safari. Now imagine that you are on the safari and describe one of your days in detail. Write it like you did the chimpanzee in space recount. Think about what you can see all the animals, what they look like in detail, how they smell and what they would feel like. The plants, how they feel, the temperature of the sun the dusty road. Then talk about the people that you meet. I can’t wait to read your writing and picture in my mind what you see. Start writing here……

 I am in my canoe with no shoes rowing away following another person rowing his boat as well. I looked at his shoes and then I said “what are those?” The other person said “what you can’t say much look at your awesome shoes.” I was coming off the canoe and I hopped onto the land. I saw all of the elephants they all had rough skin as rough as sandpaper. I went to a cheetah cause I saw it and I patted it and hugged it it was as furry as furriest fur in the world. Then I went under water with a snorkel and checked out all of the fish under the water. They were swimming.

WALT use adjectives and correct punctuation

I am dreaming I can see my family in my dream I wake up “ohhhh boring old spaceship again” “I wish that my dream came true any time soon”

I keep getting closer and closer to earth even though I don’t know where I am. “Man I can’t wait to get to Earth”. “I am bored” I say to myself. “WOW OMG I can see the milky-way”. “Ouch the sun is in my eyes it feels like boiling water on my forehead “every morning I get it it is unfair”

“I see earth!!!!!!!!!!! WWWWOOOOWWWW!!!!! Yeah!!! O.k calm down” I say to myself I am getting closer and closer I get to the the atmosphere I am there i'm shaking and shaking and shaking really fast, my heart is pounding really fast like a rocket I am really stressed out right now. Aaaaahhhhh!!!!! I finally land I get out what has happened

To our planet? I ask to myself.

All the concrete building’s, everything all of the green grass, all of my sister’s my family, “where are they” My heart stops pumping really fast. Oh I am really sad all I wanted to happen is to see my family.

I am walking all over the earth looking for my family but I look in our home they aren’t there I don’t know where they are I saw a robot I think that he would of killed all of the people even my family and sisters but he didn’t then I just died of old age and then I went to Heaven luckily.

     

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