WALT use adjectives and correct punctuation

I am dreaming I can see my family in my dream I wake up “ohhhh boring old spaceship again” “I wish that my dream came true any time soon”

I keep getting closer and closer to earth even though I don’t know where I am. “Man I can’t wait to get to Earth”. “I am bored” I say to myself. “WOW OMG I can see the milky-way”. “Ouch the sun is in my eyes it feels like boiling water on my forehead “every morning I get it it is unfair”

“I see earth!!!!!!!!!!! WWWWOOOOWWWW!!!!! Yeah!!! O.k calm down” I say to myself I am getting closer and closer I get to the the atmosphere I am there i'm shaking and shaking and shaking really fast, my heart is pounding really fast like a rocket I am really stressed out right now. Aaaaahhhhh!!!!! I finally land I get out what has happened

To our planet? I ask to myself.

All the concrete building’s, everything all of the green grass, all of my sister’s my family, “where are they” My heart stops pumping really fast. Oh I am really sad all I wanted to happen is to see my family.

I am walking all over the earth looking for my family but I look in our home they aren’t there I don’t know where they are I saw a robot I think that he would of killed all of the people even my family and sisters but he didn’t then I just died of old age and then I went to Heaven luckily.

     

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