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Thursday, June 23, 2016


WALT write a recount focussing on using adjectives and correct punctuation.

 Watch the following video of an African safari African Safari. Now imagine that you are on the safari and describe one of your days in detail. Write it like you did the chimpanzee in space recount. Think about what you can see all the animals, what they look like in detail, how they smell and what they would feel like. The plants, how they feel, the temperature of the sun the dusty road. Then talk about the people that you meet. I can’t wait to read your writing and picture in my mind what you see. Start writing here……

 I am in my canoe with no shoes rowing away following another person rowing his boat as well. I looked at his shoes and then I said “what are those?” The other person said “what you can’t say much look at your awesome shoes.” I was coming off the canoe and I hopped onto the land. I saw all of the elephants they all had rough skin as rough as sandpaper. I went to a cheetah cause I saw it and I patted it and hugged it it was as furry as furriest fur in the world. Then I went under water with a snorkel and checked out all of the fish under the water. They were swimming.

Wednesday, June 15, 2016

Science Experiment

WAL about what plants need to grow.



Zion's Kupu hou 2016

WALT increase our kupu hou.
WALT use adjectives and correct punctuation
I am dreaming I can see my family in my dream I wake up “ohhhh boring old spaceship again” “I wish that my dream came true any time soon”

I keep getting closer and closer to earth even though I don’t know where I am. “Man I can’t wait to get to Earth”. “I am bored” I say to myself. “WOW OMG I can see the milky-way”. “Ouch the sun is in my eyes it feels like boiling water on my forehead “every morning I get it it is unfair”

“I see earth!!!!!!!!!!! WWWWOOOOWWWW!!!!! Yeah!!! O.k calm down” I say to myself I am getting closer and closer I get to the the atmosphere I am there i'm shaking and shaking and shaking really fast, my heart is pounding really fast like a rocket I am really stressed out right now. Aaaaahhhhh!!!!! I finally land I get out what has happened
To our planet? I ask to myself.

All the concrete building’s, everything all of the green grass, all of my sister’s my family, “where are they” My heart stops pumping really fast. Oh I am really sad all I wanted to happen is to see my family.

I am walking all over the earth looking for my family but I look in our home they aren’t there I don’t know where they are I saw a robot I think that he would of killed all of the people even my family and sisters but he didn’t then I just died of old age and then I went to Heaven luckily.
     

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