Riccarton house

WALT write a descriptive piece of writing

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Riccarton House

I am the ghost, I am friendly but I don’t like anybody who ruins my precious house. I know this mansion better than anyone because I used to own the house. but I died and that is how I am a ghost.

I turn my invisibility on so no one can see me. I slowly glide down the creaky, narrow stairs of the attic.

During day time people were getting toured around the house so I went quiet. I snuck up on them and I followed them to see if they were keeping the house safe and they were.

The next people came soon enough and it was Ruma Toru, I heard the lady that was touring them saying they were very smart, in fact they were as smart as that lady. They knew heaps about what happened to my family. I kept following them they were scared going into my bedroom they couldn’t believe the bed was so small, they looked at my cream leather gloves that my husband got me for my wedding present. I laughed in my see through head. She told them about my room and all of them said it was cold, that’s because of me, although I felt bad and sorry for them.

They moved on to the kitchen and she showed them all of the accessories that we had to use like  a potato crusher and other accessories.

They went up into the attic I let them go up the creaky stairs first, then I follow behind them. they touched some stuff I didn’t mind.

They moved out of the house and they all had a good time in my beautiful house that I used to own. I like how they made it really big it is a better place to live in for me.

just after I say that, some dodgy people come in. I don’t like the look of them. they come walking in my house I spy on them, they hide a bomb. They have a detonator which they hold and press to blow up the bomb. I TURN MY INVISIBILITY OF!!!! I scream “Hey what are you doing? Get out of here.” They blow up all of the house, but I didn’t die because I couldn’t. I finally realised they were suicide bombers. I am as sad as a homeless person because I am now. I will have to go to look for a house to live in I don’t know where though.

The End

                                              

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