beggining the story, we have Peter

who ate the cookie from the cookie jar

Verb - Doing word

Deciding, speaking, seeing, grasping, rising, looking, holding, emerging, taking, signalling, analysing.

example - Hiding from the teacher, I slipped into class late.

My own sentance - looking into the window planning his robbery signalling, he said come on the coast is clear.

W - Start

Who, while, when, what, where, whereas.

example - while others wrote sentances, I tried not to fall asleep.

My own sentance - while they ate cookies, I ate apples.

Adverb Starter:

adverb > describes your verb (doing word) most of the time ends in ly

quickly, curiosly, importantly, firstly, often, remarkaly.

My example
1 Intregengly he walked in the property.
2 intrestly the refferee didn't see the foul.
3 surprisingly I was ontime for school even though I left home later than usual.

no more than 2 adverb starters per paragraph.

Elephants are fat, fast and grey